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[–] Sturgist@lemmy.ca 62 points 1 day ago (5 children)

It's that em-dash at the end that really solidified it for me. Was kinda on the fence most of the way through.

[–] moopet@sh.itjust.works 2 points 5 hours ago

My other half writes a lot of formal documentation as part of her work. She uses bullet lists and em-dashes a lot, and her work comes up as >90% AI. Even the stuff she wrote a decade ago. A while back, she took one of her documents and gave it to ChatGPT and said, "make this pass an AI test" and it went down to about 20% but it was no longer the house style.

[–] Rhaedas@fedia.io 39 points 1 day ago (3 children)

My wife is a professional writer and uses em dash a lot, usually as --, including in her casual messages, as it's common for her to use.

It's the formatting style of the whole thing that sounds AI to me. "Honestly" phrases really jumps out at me now, as well as the "But..." fragments. Not that they're bad, hell, I type out things that way too. But for it to be all together, it sounds AI after you've seen it a lot.

The em dash is fine here, emphasizing the final point. Although I would have probably used a comma myself for a post and not a formal manuscript.

Funny thing is, you can get AI to reduce a lot of these tells with a decent system prompt and staging of the writing process. So I'm surprised we're still seeing it a lot and it hasn't been weaned out of the latest versions.

[–] mech@feddit.org 16 points 1 day ago* (last edited 1 day ago) (1 children)

It's really hard to get rid of things caused by systematic bias in the training data.

After inhaling the entire internet, LLMs started being trained on publically available books.
And due to copyright, those were older ones from a time when em-dashes were used more.
The training results were tested by humans, which needed to be cheap, but also English language natives.
So they used workers in English-speaking African countries. Where the English taught in school is also more traditional with a focus on older literature, so the answers coming from the old literature were rated higher by the testers.

[–] stormdelay@sh.itjust.works 14 points 1 day ago

"Due to copyright" did they not all illegally download every book they could, copyrighted or not, to train their LLMs?

[–] Sturgist@lemmy.ca 4 points 1 day ago

Fair enough on the em-dash, hadn't actually considered that LLMs use it extensively because it's actually used in the wild.

[–] Cris_Citrus@piefed.zip 4 points 1 day ago (1 children)

The use of "--" is interesting, I use dashes to convey pacing constantly because I type as I speak, and so punctuation to me is largely about trying to write the delivery I want the reader to percieve, and I always just use "-" knowing it's incorrect, but I don't exactly wanna make myself seem even more like ai by switching lol

I may try using "--", thanks for sharing that!

[–] Rhaedas@fedia.io 5 points 1 day ago (1 children)

I actually used to do the same thing with the -, and by em dash becoming a thing I dived into the usage and history of it all, including ; and en dash. And now I'm using - less. But I don't use em dash more, just tend to throw a comma in.

Another weird one I learned. em dash spacing. The spacing AI tends to use is not preferred by publishers now, but is more AP style, perhaps picking it up from when it was more popular to have space between the letters. Europe tends to prefer spacing but with a en dash (and I kind of like how that looks too, but it doesn't fly if you publish in the US).

[–] Cris_Citrus@piefed.zip 3 points 1 day ago (2 children)

Wait, so what spacing is generally preferred for the em dash? Thats interesting, I never formally learned how to use one so I'm curious (I've not been to college, I have no idea if its part of typical higher education curriculum if you take any english courses)

I abuse the fuck out of commas so I reach for dashes or ; when I want a longer pause that isn't a logical end point for a thought. But a semicolon feels somehow a bit more formal to me, so I use it less for general online chatting

[–] Zwiebel@feddit.org 4 points 1 day ago* (last edited 1 day ago)

No spacing I think—just back-to-back like so

Yeah a human wouldn't have used an em dash there. It would have been a colon or an ellipse.

[–] stretch2m@infosec.pub 2 points 23 hours ago

They had me at:

honestly?

[–] lostbit@feddit.nl 1 points 23 hours ago

where you really on the fence? i just cant imagine that. every single line is classic AI.